Ally Cowee ([info]allycatophile) wrote,
@ 2008-06-12 11:40:00
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Entry tags:aristotle's incline, noels, revising, teen novels, the weekend novelist, writing, ya novels

Aristotle's Incline ala Ray of The Weekend Novelist et moi...
Okay, sadly I don't own the book, so I'm going from my notes, but, Mel asked about Ari's incline and this is how Ray visuals it, and I use it:

Opening Scene and Closing Scene provide a frame for the story.

The hook and the introduction(s)[characters, setting, conflict, desires etc.] occur in Act One, where the action starts slowish and picks up but slowly. Imagine a line starting at bottom left and moving upward in an incline to upper right.

Plot Point One (this is a MAJOR pp) ends Act One; sending the mc in a new direction, usually an action or decision they think will help them achieve their goal, but which actually results in MAJOR COMPLICATIONS, which are revealed in ACT TWO.

[this is all my weird paraphrasing, btw, lol]

ACT TWO is all about conflict and complications, lots of them. It's also a good place to weave in some backstory, if necessary. Make it seamless, though, or it will disrupt the narrative flow. ACT TWO is the longest act in the book, so it's important to keep the action rising (remember that incline) but not too quickly and not too slowly!

The MIDPOINT divides parts one and two of ACT TWO, and is a nice place for romance, seduction, and minor, foreshadowing transformations. Ray says the MP links the two chains of events in the book, those leading up to the MP and those leading away to climax and eventual resolution.

PLOT POINT 2 caps ACT TWO and is the best place for a reversal, because this is the moment of decisive change-- this is the catalyst that transforms the mc. Action. Ray characterizes it as a mini-climax that propels the story into ACT THREE. PP 1 and PP 2 must have a distinct connection.

ACT THREE is where the action peaks and then quickly falls; the shortest act in the book. MC is tired and defeated, but makes one last decision toward change. This time the mc succeeds, and in the resolution, the story plays itself out to its natural and satisfying conclusion, which ends in the wrap up.

Which wraps up my post for today :)

Back to the revision-zone!




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[info]cocoskeeper
2008-06-12 07:24 pm UTC (link)
And an excellent post it is! :-)

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[info]allycatophile
2008-06-13 06:07 am UTC (link)
Thanks, Kels :)

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[info]newport2newport
2008-06-12 08:21 pm UTC (link)
Ah, this is a helpful post indeed! Thanks for taking the time away from your revisions to write it.

Do you recommend that most writers own this book?

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[info]allycatophile
2008-06-13 06:11 am UTC (link)
Absolutely! The author is Ray (last name) and it is The Weekend Novelist (original edition is what was recommended to me, and what I read) :)

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[info]seaheidi
2008-06-12 08:56 pm UTC (link)
good luck w/ revision--love the JUNO icon. =)

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[info]allycatophile
2008-06-13 06:06 am UTC (link)
Thanks! I loved the movie :)

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